Some Graced HeartBreak..

Posted: October 1, 2013 in Poetry
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The love did happened, re-happened, but same problem kept the blink!….. Now she decides. Check it in the story:

Of this minds that truly gained you
To love. when they did for you,
For love o’er your lonely heart
Should please the lonesome thoughts
Till they appear no more to hurt
The damsel’s mood of blue alert

When he came to make promise
He, the first, with seeming forever
Came with fairness of staunchness over
Her incredulous mind to loose
In-hand was a butterfly to tickle her
For her heart did fell for love to be

So their romance did dwell in utopia
Scaring afar doubtness from the abode
They did reign like a hurricane foretold
Sooner thwarted as prone as they were
Like the standard to the hurricane.
Unknowing his love was some crooked feigned

Now, retarded thought protruded
Same broken heart blinded to be mend
Memories reminisce then a twice intruded
Who would for her emotion, a temporal winks to fend?
But she’s strong to her wise, so courageous
The memories soon dies off. Past gone thus

The singleness life last not long
Before a soft then soft voice count
She, of closed heart disdaned the fond
Sweet, like a lyrical song for mirthful flaunt
Portrayed him a reflection of the past
This, the second, vows a love to last

“My heart i offer you” he prays
Lonesome had shook me for pounds pay
If my voice, your heart would agree
Then, of this anguish, make me free
He, of sober lips pleas for her accord
The words soon struct the damsel inward

The romance did happen afterward
The twain love adornment was blissful
For love did dwell and breed there
So, they lived it, not a once awkward
And the damsel tagged this, than before peaceful
Soothing kisses, aired, here and there

Then a sudden change checked
Found comfort,thus rented their mind
When he, on her emotions trecked
But she was quick to avert such of before kind
Replicated the shot, till a war aroused
Before a wink circled, the romance closed.

She cried, not of the love ending
Because brightly she saw the alert
Thus the consent prepared her a longing
But cried for ever granting him her heart
So, she shut her heart to love
Until she finally found a surrogate brother to adore!

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  1. Mary says:

    Oh, Adam, that ending was most unexpected; but worth waiting for! You have created quite a portrait here!! (Enjoyed!)

  2. brian miller says:

    They did reign like a hurricane foretold…cool way of putting it…
    and tht is the risk of giving away our hearts…we can not see the future…
    to not risk though would be such a lonely life….

  3. Too many stories of love end this way.. wonderfully expressed.. but still fill hearts of sorrow…

  4. A triumphant poem and the ending was mind blowing! wow! Adam you are a brilliant writer my friend. 🙂

  5. The ups and downs of love, I enjoyed your lyrical narrative ~ Better to just shut down your heart then being vulnerable and hurt again 🙂

  6. claudia says:

    So, she shut her heart to love…it’s sad when we do this…there will be always wings that come with love and deepest disappointment…sometimes both on the same day… but what would we do without…?

  7. opeyemi says:

    bravo……dat my boooi,luv dis

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