LoneLy Moon

Posted: October 31, 2013 in Poetry
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If only some could be seer to know that another opportunities, apart from the ones at their disposal at a particular time could be elusive, nonchalance and pride would have had no place in the hearts.. Below is a beautiful occurrence in the closet of the moon :

The Moon cries of lonesome this night
Down the north, her voice blooms her plight
Dewing down serenity fight
O’er the airs of her visual light
Till it glooms the ambience from bright

I heard it of sentiment mind
Letting my pondering face go blind
To credit this pitiful kind
Questing to repair it behind
For the Moon, a true droll to find

Hence, the tree were silent lowly
Petrified birds, fly quite gently
To lay on their loved nest softly
The animals, standing humbly
Seething, but seem sober mildly

Seethe? Of this worrisome issue?
All, in accord, simpers and boo
With stinging satire of shame hue
To paint the moon’s mockery al through
Till she hides and not again new

Me, so naïve of the whole thought
Soon excel that they mock moon’s pride
Because stars, of her love twice sought
But thinks them degrade of her bride
Gesturing to oppress their lot

Now who for comfort, would friend moon?
Easing her pain with love so soon
Till her heart falls for a love tried.
Twice troubled and Forlorn; She cried.
Soon she drowns of loneliness tide!

So is how the Moon wasted time and chances when they appeared. Proudly rejected the Stars, of her neighbourhood’s companionship advancement.. Now she is dying of been abandoned.. This is just a reminder to the prouds that one day the wage for it will come…! This poem is linked up with Dversepoets tonight for Meeting the bar! Your entries are welcome there…

© ~ AdamsMurphy ~ 2013

  1. claudia says:

    ah – we should never reject those that offer friendship… and pride is no good companion at all… ugh…i’m feeling sad for her you know…

  2. Brian Miller says:

    a bit sad there in the end…drowning in loneliness…def the mocking of the moon as well does not make me feel so good…until she does not want to show her face….

  3. How terribly lonely ~ I feel sadness for the moon (excellent metaphor to use) ~

  4. You etched the environment of loneliness in your words. A beautiful write… well-expressed and thoughtful writing. 🙂

  5. Robin Moz says:

    Nice write up.

  6. vbholmes says:

    Very nice and the last stanza captures such emotion–

  7. Pride has been the downfall of many. Thank you for joining us.

  8. Temadams says:

    Pride goes before destruction.A word is enough for the wise. Lovely one

  9. Joyce says:

    I do consider all the concepts you have presented in your post.
    They’re really convincing and can certainly work. Still, the posts aare too brief for novices.
    Could you please prolong them a bit from next time?
    Thanks for the post.

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